WALT: write a recount
Success criteria:
- The first paragraph says where, when, who, why and how.
- The events are in order.
- I will use time words (first, then, finally, etc.).
- My recount is written in the past tense.
- Details are added to make my writing interesting. Adding adjectives (no went!)
- I finish my writing by saying how I felt
Well done Hazel. Your recount has all the events in order and some detail was added. Next step - use more time words.
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